寻英语高考优秀作文10篇和5篇改错题


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  【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是,过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点,用英语写一篇短文。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
  For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
  A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
  


5.现在大城市都流行过西方的节日,如圣诞节、愚人节等,请对这一现象发表你的看法
  Nowadays, there appears a phenomenon that the western customs are spreading into the east countries step by step, thus making many inhabitants who live in big cities enjoy themselves on these western festivals such as Christmas Day, April Fool’s Day, etc. Such phenomenon shows us that the world people are getting close gradually and the world is becoming smaller and smaller as well. Therefore, in my opinion, it’s a normal phenomenon s well as a necessary trend.
  First of all, it shows that we Chinese have become much opener rather than clinging to some very old customs, which are opposite our living. Looking back on the history, we can find the answer to why our China was very poor and weak in the 1800’s. Yes, the answer is that we closed ourselves not to let other countries know about us, and this led us to a very hard road on which we suffered many wars that many European countries launched. So I think it is more than necessary to accept other customs instead of closing ourselves. Of course, festivals are just the beginning.
  What’s more, the Open and Reform Policy results in this. So I want to say it is a great achievement for the policy. Since we took the policy into practice, our country is developing with a rapid speed. No doubt it is an essential trend.
  Last but not the least, we may get closer and closer not only to our home friends but also to many foreigners. We can never feel embarrassed for not knowing the other’s customs and manners. And more misunderstandings can be avoided as well.    


7.【试题回放】


  假定你是李华,正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。


  Dear Sir/Madame,


  I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.


  As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?


  How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.


  Yours,


  Li Hua


  8.【试题回放】假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。


  Dear Editor ,


  Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.


  Yours truly,


  Li Hua  


10.【试题回放】


  一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。


  Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!


  Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.


  500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!


  Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.


    积累卡片英汉互译


  好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利


  好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are


  very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且非常的愉快。


  评析:bring great convenience,带来便利。


改错题


1.May 10, 2007
  Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down 1. _______
  and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, 2. _______
  but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the 3. _______
  class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to 4. _______
  my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused 5. _______
  the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt 6. _______
  in my foot became worse. Now I know I’m wrong. We 7. _______
  can tell others our need for help and accept his help. 8. _______
  Some day we can not help others in return. In this way, 9. _______
  we can get along to each other happily and peacefully. 10. _______
  答案
  1. while→when2. greatly→great
  3. has→had4. walk→walking
  5. but→and6. as后添加a
  7. √8. his→their
9. 删除not10. to→with


4.Sept. 10th Wednesday Fine


  Today is Teacher's Day. I attended a celebration 1. _______


  meeting hold by our school. At the meeting,25 2. _______


  advanced teachers were praised and those had 3. _______


  completed 30 years of teaching were given medals. 4. _______


  My the first English teacher was one of those praised. 5. _______


  After the meeting,my classmates and I went to see them.6. _______


  Seeing us,the grey-haried teacher looked exciting.


  When we said we all wanted to be teachers 7. _______


  and devoted ourselves to education in the future,he 8. _______


  nodded with satisfaction. He said in firm voice, 9. _______


  teaching is a noble job. Man would be stupid with 10. _______


  education. We all agreed and were greatly encouraged by his words.


  答案及解析


  1. Teacher's改为Teachers'.(人)的节日一般用名词复数表泛指。如: Children's Day,Women's Day等。


  2. hold改为held.此处为过去分词作定语表被动关系。


  3. had前加who.仔细分析句子结构便可知此处应为定语从句,those或all等词后只能接who, 不能用that.


  4. 此行无错。


  5. 删去the.序数词前有my等形容词性物主代词时,不需要用定冠词。


  6. them改为him.代词指代应一致。根据下文the grey-haired teacher看出, 此处应为him.


  7. exciting改为excited.人作主语时,表语一般用过去分词; 物作主语则用现在分词。


  8. devoted改为devote.根据句意可知,and后的devote应与不定式短语be teachers并列。


  9. in后加a.in a loud/low voice为固定短语。


  10. with改为without.介词逻辑错误。根据常识可判断, 该处想表达的原意为没有教育, 人类将会愚昧无知.


5.


Women are taking a much more important part in society today.    1._______________


Now women are working like teachers, scientists and even leaders.    2._______________


Almost all jobs that were used to be done by men are done perfectly    3._______________


well by women. Women are no longer looking down upon in    4._______________


society. As the changes in their social role, women’s position in     5._______________


the family have been improved as well. It’s hard to find the wife is    6._______________


busy though the husband is sitting in an armchair, watching TV. In    7._______________


spite of all these changes, a great number of men still guard his rights.  8.________________


They think of women as incapable creatures. Sometimes few women   9.________________


are allowed attend important meetings. This is the problem we should  10.________________


try to solve now.


答案与解析


1. taking→playing。play a…part 是固定搭配,意为“对……起作用”。


2. like→as。表示身份常常用 as。


3. 去掉were。used to do意为“过去常常……”。


4. looking→looked。be looked down upon意为“被人轻视”。


5. As→With。“with + 名词 + 介词短语”为独立主格结构作伴随状语。


6. have→has。主语 position 为不可数名词。


7. though→while。两句之间不是让步关系而是对比关系。


8. his→their。指代主语 men,故用代词 their。


9. √。(from )


10. allow 后加 to。allow sb to do sth 为固定短语


6.


Climbing is my favorite sport. I’m very much fond    1.________


of it. A day, early in the morning my friends and I    2.________


put on our sports shoes and start off. After climbing for    3.________


half an hour, we got to the top of the mountain. Where    4.________


we got a good view. To the north, a big river across the    5.________


city. There were many ships sail busily. A lot of beautiful   6.________


tree were there, too. The sun started to go down, and it    7.________


was time to go back. On the way home, we were    8.________


talking and laughing, full excitement. We had    9.________


a good time on that day.    10.________


答案与解析


1. 去掉 much。much 修饰比较级,不修饰原级。


2. A→One。one day可用作状语,意为“有一天(指过去),有朝一日”。


3. start→started。全文主导时态为一般过去时。


4. Where→There。本句为简单句,不需引导词。


5. across→crossed。across 为介词,cross 是动词。


6. sail→sailing。现在分词作后置定语。


7. tree→trees。tree 是可数名词,由 a lot of 修饰,应复数形式。


8. √。


9.  full 后加 of。(be) full of 为固定短语,意为“充满……”。


10. 去掉on 或 that→the。有that, this, next, last等词修饰的时间名词作状语时不用介词。


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